Douglas packed a lot of things in his luggage before leaving for the trip.
Fix the vague language; make it more precise
The hummingbird's wings blurred while it eagerly sips the sugar water from the feeder.
Fix the verb tense consistency error.
Carla went on the roller coaster with he and Stella.
Fix the pronoun error (he-->him).
Charlie and Rhonda purchased the home theyselves.
Fix the pronoun error (theyselves --> themselves).
Viet, who desperately needed an idea for his paper—had a moment of brilliance at lunchtime.
Fix the punctuation error.
"Michael just ate a hamster", Junie explained.
Fix the punctuation error. Punctuation goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
Capote, my youngest dog, likes his belly scratched, after a snack.
Fix the comma error.
Theodor Seuss Geisel, also known as Dr. Seuss, wrote over (60 children's books).
Fix the punctuation error.
Hoping to build stronger mussels, Scott went to the gym every day.
Fix the spelling mistake (muscles).
Most people don't enjoy mustard on pickles, I do.
Fix the run-on sentence (comma splice).
Felicia borrowed the book but she forgot to return it.
Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).
The sign said there was roadwork ahead so he decided to slow down.
Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).
I want to know whose coming to my birthday party.
Fix the spelling mistake (who's).
The campers ate his s'mores around the campfire, and they were the perfect snack.
fix the pronoun-antecedent agreement error
Since she doesn't like bold colors she only paints with pastels.
add a comma after the opener (AAAWWUBBIS word)
Barry the beaver put on his bathing suit ran across the street, and jumped into the swampy water.
Add a comma in the list.
Pouring a large bowl of Cheerios and sitting down for his favorite Saturday breakfast.
Fix the sentence fragment.
The fluffy pink unicorn ran across the field it flew above us.
fix the run-on sentence
Facing his greatest fear.
fix the sentence fragment
Henry walked to the park and sits on the bench next to his favorite chipmunk.
Fix the verb tense consistency error.
I smashed my piggy bank, my most prized possession on a pile of sharp rocks.
Add a comma to the interrupter.
Volunteers worked, to clean the gooey oil from animals rocks, and water.
Fix the comma error.
The cats runs around the house, hoping to find a mouse.
Fix the subject-verb agreement error.
The teachers at Mayberry Middle School gives too much homework.
Fix the subject-verb agreement error.