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How Would You Edit It?

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    Students identify the error and how they would fix it.
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  • Since she doesn't like bold colors she only paints with pastels.
    add a comma after the opener (AAAWWUBBIS word)
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  • The fluffy pink unicorn ran across the field it flew above us.
    fix the run-on sentence
  •  15
  • Facing his greatest fear.
    fix the sentence fragment
  •  15
  • The campers ate his s'mores around the campfire, and they were the perfect snack.
    fix the pronoun-antecedent agreement error
  •  15
  • Barry the beaver put on his bathing suit ran across the street, and jumped into the swampy water.
    Add a comma in the list.
  •  15
  • Pouring a large bowl of Cheerios and sitting down for his favorite Saturday breakfast.
    Fix the sentence fragment.
  •  15
  • Felicia borrowed the book but she forgot to return it.
    Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).
  •  15
  • Charlie and Rhonda purchased the home theyselves.
    Fix the pronoun error (theyselves --> themselves).
  •  15
  • The sign said there was roadwork ahead so he decided to slow down.
    Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).
  •  15
  • Carla went on the roller coaster with he and Stella.
    Fix the pronoun error (he-->him).
  •  15
  • I smashed my piggy bank, my most prized possession on a pile of sharp rocks.
    Add a comma to the interrupter.
  •  15
  • The cats runs around the house, hoping to find a mouse.
    Fix the subject-verb agreement error.
  •  15
  • Douglas packed a lot of things in his luggage before leaving for the trip.
    Fix the vague language; make it more precise
  •  15
  • Hoping to build stronger mussels, Scott went to the gym every day.
    Fix the spelling mistake (muscles).
  •  15
  • The teachers at Mayberry Middle School gives too much homework.
    Fix the subject-verb agreement error.
  •  15
  • Most people don't enjoy mustard on pickles, I do.
    Fix the run-on sentence (comma splice).
  •  15