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  • She taught me how to use a knife to cut tomatoes, then taught me how to break an egg and finally instructed how to control cooking temperature. (3 errors)
    tomatoes and how to crack an egg… instructed me …
  • After walked for a while, they set on the bench. (2 errors)
    walking / sat
  • It has cultivated my ability to cook and interested in cooking. (1 error)
    interest n.
  • I recall my childhood, when my grandmother was cooking, I always stayed beside her. ( 1 error)
    When I recall my children, I always think of my grandmother’s cooking with my company.
  • They felt very ashamed, cleaned up the messy environment and hurried down the mountain.
    , cleaning… and hurrying /rushing / dashing
  • Because they didn’t find the rules, Mary’s father started to smoke, Mary and her brother discarded their food wrappers beside the bench. (1 error)
    . A few minutes later, / Before long,