After walked for a while, they set on the bench. (2 errors)
walking / sat
Because they didn’t find the rules, Mary’s father started to smoke, Mary and her brother discarded their food wrappers beside the bench. (1 error)
. A few minutes later, / Before long,
They felt very ashamed, cleaned up the messy environment and hurried down the mountain.
, cleaning… and hurrying /rushing / dashing
I recall my childhood, when my grandmother was cooking, I always stayed beside her. ( 1 error)
When I recall my children, I always think of my grandmother’s cooking with my company.
She taught me how to use a knife to cut tomatoes, then taught me how to break an egg and finally instructed how to control cooking temperature. (3 errors)
tomatoes and how to crack an egg… instructed me …
It has cultivated my ability to cook and interested in cooking. (1 error)
interest n.
