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21st June IELTS Writing Review

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  • It is considered that the media gives too much attention to the rich and famous.
    Not ok; Many consider that ...
  • One more entrance has been built, which has access to an underground car park.
    Ok
  • The park has changed considerably during the over years.
    Not ok ... over the years/during the given period
  • Media should report on international news, which is more significant.
    Not ok. The media
  • Celebrities can be a good influence on society.
    Ok
  • Many reporters prefer to write about renowned people's lives.
    Not ok. Shakespeare is renowned AS a writer; Wimbledon is renowned FOR its tennis.
  • The media could report on subjects such as global warming, wars, scientific developments or politics.
    Ok
  • There are several reasons why journalists should not reduce their coverage of the famous.
    Ok
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