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There are several reasons why journalists should not reduce their coverage of the famous.
Ok
Many reporters prefer to write about renowned people's lives.
Not ok. Shakespeare is renowned AS a writer; Wimbledon is renowned FOR its tennis.
Media should report on international news, which is more significant.
Not ok. The media
It is considered that the media gives too much attention to the rich and famous.
Not ok; Many consider that ...
Celebrities can be a good influence on society.
Ok
The media could report on subjects such as global warming, wars, scientific developments or politics.
Ok
One more entrance has been built, which has access to an underground car park.
Ok
The park has changed considerably during the over years.
Not ok ... over the years/during the given period
