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NGƯỜI TA THƯỜNG NÓI RẰNG [passive] children benefit from caring for domestic animals

It is often said that

NGƯỜI PHẢN ĐỐI of fuel tax are able to DẪN BẰNG CHỨNG from other countries

opponents/ critics --------- cite evidence

because their interests NẰM Ở CHỖ KHÁC

lie elsewhere

On the one hand, NHỮNG NGƯỜI ỦNG HỘ taxation of fossil fuels promote the idea that

supporters of/ those who support/ advocates for

NÓI VẬY Ý LÀ even people who have saved or invested carefully during their working lives will find their income in retirement reduced considerably,

By that we mean that/ That is to say

[passive] Đúng là there are some positives to retirement

It is true that

It seems to me that the sheer cost of universal, free healthcare makes this an MONG MUỐN KHÔNG THỰC TẾ

an impractical aspiration

However, the issue is not entirely GIẢN ĐƠN

straightforward

[passive] CÓ NHỮNG TRANH LUẬN CHỐNG LẠI Ý NÀY

arguments can be made against this idea

TRỞ NGẠI CHÍNH DƯỜNG NHƯ LÀ the number of recipients of healthcare

The main obstacle would appear to be

Finally, [passive] PHẢI NÓI LÀ not all young people actually want to keep a pet

it must be said that

this needs to be BỔ SUNG by other methods, such as private insurance.

supplemented

DÙ NHIỀU CỠ NÀO the family may offer support,

however much

Noise pollution is a ÍT ĐƯỢC NHẮC ĐẾN HƠN form of pollution,

less-discussed

[Passive] CÓ THỂ THẤY CÁC VÍ DỤ in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a pet may be prohibitive.

Examples can be seen

A further NHIỀU NGƯỜI THẤY impact is lack of sleep,

widely-observed

DƯỜNG NHƯ this serves the interests of both the children and the pets involved.

it would appear that

They CHỈ RA BẰNG CHỨNG from countries such as

point to evidence

In many countries, the population is ageing MỘT CÁCH NHẤT QUÁN

consistently

[passive] NÊN CHĂNG the decision to keep a pet should be based on a child’s interest,

it is advisable that

However, imposing taxes is a CHIẾN THUẬT GÂY TRANH CÃI

controversal tactic

For instance, in the UK, such courses were HẦU NHƯ free to the student until recently

virtually

Ý LÀ KHÔNG PHẢI NÓI all retired people suffer in this way but the majority of them actually do.

That is not to say

If such courses were more available, it would reduce the issue of living expenses PHẦN NÀO

to some extent

A further NHIỀU NGƯỜI BIẾT cause is

well known

MỘT VẤN ĐỀ NỮA LIÊN QUAN ĐẾN the cost of modern medicine

A further issue relates to

this ĐƯA RA CHO the older people themselves with challenges as well as opportunities It

presents

SANG TỚI NHỮNG GIẢI PHÁP KHẢ THI, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding to courses.

Turning to possible solutions

MỘT CÁCH GIẢI QUYẾT NỮA CÓ THỂ LÀ for the Universities to offer shorter courses,

Another remedy might be

However, this aspiration suffers significantly when ĐỐI MẶT VỚI THỰC TẾ TÀI CHÍNH

confronted with financial reality

higher tax has RÕ RÀNG not reduced demand for such fuels.

apparently

especially in today’s DÀY ĐẶC CÔNG NGHỆ world.

technology-dense

MỘT PHẢN HỒI KẾT HỢP by the state, the institutions and the individuals may well lessen the severity of the situation.

a coordinated response

but CÓ VẺ NÓ LÀ VẬY very frequently.

it appears to be the case

To summarise, CÓ VẺ HỢP LÝ for the state to fund as much as possible of the nation’s healthcare.

it seems reasonable

This appears to have a number of HIỆU ỨNG ĐỐI LẬP

contradictory effects

Overall, I would NGHIÊNG VỀ CÙNG PHE VỚI the opponents of fuel taxation.

tend to side with