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NGƯỜI TA THƯỜNG NÓI RẰNG [passive] children benefit from caring for domestic animals

It is often said that

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especially in today’s DÀY ĐẶC CÔNG NGHỆ world.

technology-dense

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However, the issue is not entirely GIẢN ĐƠN

straightforward

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[passive] CÓ NHỮNG TRANH LUẬN CHỐNG LẠI Ý NÀY

arguments can be made against this idea

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[Passive] CÓ THỂ THẤY CÁC VÍ DỤ in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a pet may be prohibitive.

Examples can be seen

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Finally, [passive] PHẢI NÓI LÀ not all young people actually want to keep a pet

it must be said that

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because their interests NẰM Ở CHỖ KHÁC

lie elsewhere

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[passive] NÊN CHĂNG the decision to keep a pet should be based on a child’s interest,

it is advisable that

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DƯỜNG NHƯ this serves the interests of both the children and the pets involved.

it would appear that

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For instance, in the UK, such courses were HẦU NHƯ free to the student until recently

virtually

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SANG TỚI NHỮNG GIẢI PHÁP KHẢ THI, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding to courses.

Turning to possible solutions

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MỘT CÁCH GIẢI QUYẾT NỮA CÓ THỂ LÀ for the Universities to offer shorter courses,

Another remedy might be

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If such courses were more available, it would reduce the issue of living expenses PHẦN NÀO

to some extent

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MỘT PHẢN HỒI KẾT HỢP by the state, the institutions and the individuals may well lessen the severity of the situation.

a coordinated response

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In many countries, the population is ageing MỘT CÁCH NHẤT QUÁN

consistently

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this ĐƯA RA CHO the older people themselves with challenges as well as opportunities It

presents

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