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  • This people are only talking to people online
    THESE people are only talking to people online
  • Nowadays, people can't keep their attention in something for much long.
    Nowadays, people have SHORT ATTENTION SPANS / can't focus ON something for very long.
  • Some people think that teenagers aren't used to talk in person anymore
    Some people think that teenagers aren't used to TALKING in person anymore
  • There is a common opinion that without the internet we can't enjoy life to the full.
    correct!
  • In one hand, the internet can provide us with entertainment.
    ON one hand, the internet can provide us with entertainment.
  • Social media apps enable communications across distances.
    Correct!
  • Many people use the internet for very differents reasons
    Many people use the internet for very different reasons
  • The internet has been used in hospitals since it has been created.
    Correct!
  • People are getting used to hang out with their friends online
    People are getting used to HANGING out with their friends online
  • The internet can have a negative effect in our lives
    The internet can have a negative effect ON our lives