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People are getting used to hang out with their friends online

People are getting used to HANGING out with their friends online

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There is a common opinion that without the internet we can't enjoy life to the full.

correct!

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Some people think that teenagers aren't used to talk in person anymore

Some people think that teenagers aren't used to TALKING in person anymore

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This people are only talking to people online

THESE people are only talking to people online

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Many people use the internet for very differents reasons

Many people use the internet for very different reasons

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In one hand, the internet can provide us with entertainment.

ON one hand, the internet can provide us with entertainment.

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The internet has been used in hospitals since it has been created.

Correct!

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Social media apps enable communications across distances.

Correct!

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Nowadays, people can't keep their attention in something for much long.

Nowadays, people have SHORT ATTENTION SPANS / can't focus ON something for very long.

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The internet can have a negative effect in our lives

The internet can have a negative effect ON our lives

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