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  • People like doctors and engineers have too much lower salaries.
    People like doctors and engineers have MUCH TOO LOW salaries.
  • In adittion, ...
    In ADDITION, ...
  • Sports stars are very famous so it is normal that they win a lot of money.
    Sports stars are very famous so it is normal that they EARN a lot of money.
  • One of the biggest argues nowadays ...
    ARGUMENTS
  • Although, there is a large difference between the people who does the same sport.
    HOWEVER, there is a large difference AMONG the people who DO the same sport.
  • When I was learning English I heared lot of English music which help me a lot.
    When I was learning English I HEARD A lot of English music which HELPED me a lot.
  • Seville is known by its great temperatures all over the year.
    Seville is known FOR its great temperatures THROUGHOUT the year.
  • How are your family and you? I wish everyone is fine.
    I HOPE everyone is fine.
  • ... this produce problems into the teams and on my opinion it's not fair.
    ... this PRODUCES problems WITHIN teams WHICH IN my opinion is not fair.
  • People here talks very differently.
    TALK
  • You should download Duolingo wich is a app that will help you with vocabulary.
    You should download Duolingo WHICH is AN app that will help you with vocabulary.
  • It must be considered the awesome effect of money on the sports they play.
    We must consider .... / The awesome effect ... must be considered.
  • The people that consume that type of things are the responsibles of their salaries.
    The people that consume that type of THING are RESPONSIBLE FOR their salaries.
  • They spend it on useless things like big and elegants cars.
    They spend it on useless things like big and ELEGANT cars.
  • Nowadays everyone want to become a sport star.
    Nowadays everyone WANTS to become a sportS star.
  • This shops are not like the others.
    THESE shops are not like the others.
  • At this time there aren't so much turists.
    At this time there are NOT so MANY TOURISTS.
  • This big amounts of money have made a bad effect on the sports.
    THESE big amounts of money have HAD a bad effect on sports.
  • You won't enjoy Seville whether you come in summer.
    You won't enjoy Seville IF you come in summer.
  • My advices for you to spend a good time there are ...
    My ADVICE TO you IF YOU WANT TO HAVE a good time there are ...
  • You can visits some famous monuments as ´La Giralda' or 'La Torre del Oro'.
    You can VISIT some famous monuments SUCH as ´La Giralda' or 'La Torre del Oro'.
  • ... and thats have consecuences on the economy of a country.
    ... and THAT HAS CONSEQUENCES on the economy of a country.