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When I was learning English I heared lot of English music which help me a lot.
When I was learning English I HEARD A lot of English music which HELPED me a lot.
People here talks very differently.
TALK
How are your family and you? I wish everyone is fine.
I HOPE everyone is fine.
You should download Duolingo wich is a app that will help you with vocabulary.
You should download Duolingo WHICH is AN app that will help you with vocabulary.
Although, there is a large difference between the people who does the same sport.
HOWEVER, there is a large difference AMONG the people who DO the same sport.
Nowadays everyone want to become a sport star.
Nowadays everyone WANTS to become a sportS star.
They spend it on useless things like big and elegants cars.
They spend it on useless things like big and ELEGANT cars.
Sports stars are very famous so it is normal that they win a lot of money.
Sports stars are very famous so it is normal that they EARN a lot of money.
This big amounts of money have made a bad effect on the sports.
THESE big amounts of money have HAD a bad effect on sports.
It must be considered the awesome effect of money on the sports they play.
We must consider .... / The awesome effect ... must be considered.
People like doctors and engineers have too much lower salaries.
People like doctors and engineers have MUCH TOO LOW salaries.
... and thats have consecuences on the economy of a country.
... and THAT HAS CONSEQUENCES on the economy of a country.
... this produce problems into the teams and on my opinion it's not fair.
... this PRODUCES problems WITHIN teams WHICH IN my opinion is not fair.
One of the biggest argues nowadays ...
ARGUMENTS
The people that consume that type of things are the responsibles of their salaries.
The people that consume that type of THING are RESPONSIBLE FOR their salaries.
Seville is known by its great temperatures all over the year.
Seville is known FOR its great temperatures THROUGHOUT the year.
