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this needs to be BỔ SUNG by other methods, such as private insurance.

supplemented

To summarise, CÓ VẺ HỢP LÝ for the state to fund as much as possible of the nation’s healthcare.

it seems reasonable

However, this aspiration suffers significantly when ĐỐI MẶT VỚI THỰC TẾ TÀI CHÍNH

confronted with financial reality

MỘT VẤN ĐỀ NỮA LIÊN QUAN ĐẾN the cost of modern medicine

A further issue relates to

TRỞ NGẠI CHÍNH DƯỜNG NHƯ LÀ the number of recipients of healthcare

The main obstacle would appear to be

It seems to me that the sheer cost of universal, free healthcare makes this an MONG MUỐN KHÔNG THỰC TẾ

an impractical aspiration

A further NHIỀU NGƯỜI THẤY impact is lack of sleep,

widely-observed

A further NHIỀU NGƯỜI BIẾT cause is

well known

Noise pollution is a ÍT ĐƯỢC NHẮC ĐẾN HƠN form of pollution,

less-discussed

Overall, I would NGHIÊNG VỀ CÙNG PHE VỚI the opponents of fuel taxation.

tend to side with

higher tax has RÕ RÀNG not reduced demand for such fuels.

apparently

NGƯỜI PHẢN ĐỐI of fuel tax are able to DẪN BẰNG CHỨNG from other countries

opponents/ critics --------- cite evidence

They CHỈ RA BẰNG CHỨNG from countries such as

point to evidence

On the one hand, NHỮNG NGƯỜI ỦNG HỘ taxation of fossil fuels promote the idea that

supporters of/ those who support/ advocates for

This appears to have a number of HIỆU ỨNG ĐỐI LẬP

contradictory effects

However, imposing taxes is a CHIẾN THUẬT GÂY TRANH CÃI

controversal tactic

but CÓ VẺ NÓ LÀ VẬY very frequently.

it appears to be the case

Ý LÀ KHÔNG PHẢI NÓI all retired people suffer in this way but the majority of them actually do.

That is not to say

[passive] Đúng là there are some positives to retirement

It is true that

DÙ NHIỀU CỠ NÀO the family may offer support,

however much

NÓI VẬY Ý LÀ even people who have saved or invested carefully during their working lives will find their income in retirement reduced considerably,

By that we mean that/ That is to say

this ĐƯA RA CHO the older people themselves with challenges as well as opportunities It

presents

In many countries, the population is ageing MỘT CÁCH NHẤT QUÁN

consistently

MỘT PHẢN HỒI KẾT HỢP by the state, the institutions and the individuals may well lessen the severity of the situation.

a coordinated response

If such courses were more available, it would reduce the issue of living expenses PHẦN NÀO

to some extent

MỘT CÁCH GIẢI QUYẾT NỮA CÓ THỂ LÀ for the Universities to offer shorter courses,

Another remedy might be

SANG TỚI NHỮNG GIẢI PHÁP KHẢ THI, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding to courses.

Turning to possible solutions

For instance, in the UK, such courses were HẦU NHƯ free to the student until recently

virtually

DƯỜNG NHƯ this serves the interests of both the children and the pets involved.

it would appear that

[passive] NÊN CHĂNG the decision to keep a pet should be based on a child’s interest,

it is advisable that

because their interests NẰM Ở CHỖ KHÁC

lie elsewhere

Finally, [passive] PHẢI NÓI LÀ not all young people actually want to keep a pet

it must be said that

[Passive] CÓ THỂ THẤY CÁC VÍ DỤ in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a pet may be prohibitive.

Examples can be seen

[passive] CÓ NHỮNG TRANH LUẬN CHỐNG LẠI Ý NÀY

arguments can be made against this idea

However, the issue is not entirely GIẢN ĐƠN

straightforward

especially in today’s DÀY ĐẶC CÔNG NGHỆ world.

technology-dense

NGƯỜI TA THƯỜNG NÓI RẰNG [passive] children benefit from caring for domestic animals

It is often said that