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[JOOL] Senior Writing Club 1

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  • If you had any spare time this weekend, you will be able to read an e-book!
    If you had any spare time this weekend, you WOULD be able to read an e-book!
  • Regrettably, women doesn't always earn as much money as men.
    Regrettably, women DON'T always earn as much (money) as men.
  • If you prefer comics there are also e-comics and special apps available.
    If you prefer comics, (<THE COMMA) there are also e-comics and special apps available.
  • Sunsets are far more exquisite then sunrises.
    Sunsets are far more exquisite THAN sunrises.
  • An e-book is an magnificent acquisition.
    An e-book is A magnificent acquisition.
  • In conclusion, for people buy printed books, a lot of trees have to be cut down.
    In conclusion, BECAUSE people buy printed books, a lot of trees have to be cut down.
  • When a family member is passing a tough time, being here for them is important.
    When a family member is HAVING / GOING THROUGH a tough time, being here for them is important.
  • Neil DeGrasse-Tyson knows much about the universe.
    Neil DeGrasse-Tyson knows A LOT about the universe.
  • If you worry about too many things, writing about it helps!
    If you worry about too many things, writing about THEM helps!