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  • ...that´s unimportat cause we´d lots of fun...
    unimportaNt BECAUSE WE HAD
  • I spent too much time in study and do my homework
    ON studyING and doING homework
  • After it you can go with your friends
    After THAT you can go OUT with your friends
  • But now, I learn to give the time each things need
    HOWEVER, / ALTHOUGH now, I´M learnING to give/dedicate the time each thing needS
  • We go up the Torre Eiffel and is was amasing
    We WENT up the EIFFEL TOWER and it was amaZing
  • I play basketball. I like it so much.
    I play basketball, WHICH I´M CRAZY ABOUT
  • Spending time in the swimming pool it´s better than go to the beach
    IS better than goING to the beach
  • You can go to another places
    OTHER places
  • Their food is too rare
    Their food is VERY/EXTREMELY STRANGE/UNUSUAL
  • That's a terrible notice
    That's terrible news
  • I usually go to the beach and I love it because...
    I usually go to the beach, WHICH I love because...
  • The cafe is too hot its extremely hot, but there is so nice the flavour
    The COFFEE is too hot, IT´S extremely hot, ALTHOUGH the flavour is SO TASTY
  • This summer we have traveled to Paris, and for my point of view, is more beautiful than some other city.
    we TRAVELLED (past simple)... FROM my point of view... some other citIES
  • Thank you for having me for this project
    Thanks for INCLUDING/INVOLVING me in this/your project
  • We currently have contact...
    We ARE currently IN TOUCH / IN CONTACT
  • The health is very important factor in the life
    Health is A very important factor IN LIFE (No "the" with general nouns)
  • Sometimes is quite boring
    Sometimes IT´S quite boring (a little dull)
  • You will think what i, that what type o f food will be
    (I´m not sure but here is a possibility:) You may imagine, as I did, what type of food they serve
  • You have to find 30 minutes all days to do some sport and eat very healthy.
    EVERY DAY... eat healthILY
  • All of the teenagers dream to be fit
    All teenagers dream OF/ABOUT beING fit
  • I wasn´t doing nothing that I keen on.
    I wasn´t doing ANYTHING that I´M keen on
  • It will be funny to find out what the people like to do and were they like to go
    It will be FUN... and wHere
  • These are my advices for you have a healthy life
    This IS my advice FOR HAVING a healthy life
  • Make a proyect about... sounds very fun
    DOING a proJect
  • Other thing I love it´s visiting cities...
    ANother thing I love IS visiting cities
  • no one want to do any sacrifice for achieve their goals
    no one wantS to MAKE any sacrifice TO achieve their goals
  • Tell me what your teacher tell you about you project.
    LET ME KNOW (more informal) what your teacher tellS you about youR project
  • In one hand... in the other hand
    ON (not in)
  • I love this kind of holidays since we don´t have school and we would enjoy we our family
    I´M CRAZY ABOUT this kind of holiday... we enjoy IT WITH our family
  • Since I have memory
    Since I CAN REMEMBER
  • On the other had i found that there isn´t enough waiters
    haNd.. there WEREN´T enough waiters
  • I´ve been loving this kind of holidays since I started them.
    I´ve been ENJOYING (we can´t use stative verbs in continuous forms) THESE KINDS (plural)
  • There are lot of type of games for play
    There are A LOT / LOTS of typeS of games TO play. (Better option: There is a wide variety of games to play = 20 points)
  • I was recently on holidays a I went in a very interesting trip
    ...on holiday AND I went ON...
  • Sometimes is difficult to go school
    Sometimes IT´S difficult to go TO school
  • ...the best way to do sport and stay with friends.
    HANG OUT / SPEND TIME with friends
  • tell me your opinion about find time to keep fit and healthy, leave a paper in the notice board
    ...about findING time... leave YOUR RESPONSE / A COMMENT ON the notice board
  • What about eating healthy?
    eating healthy FOOD (10 points) / eating HEALTHILY (15points)
  • My family and I spend the most time of our holidays going to the beach.
    ...spend MOST OF / THE MAJORITY OF our holidays
  • I like this type of vacation since you disconnect from everything I have done throughout the year
    I´M KEEN ON / FOND OF... ("you" and "I" should be the same pronoun)