On the one hand, In contrast, in spite of (+ noun/ gerund/the fact that …) , However,/ Nevertheless
Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you given a clear reason to justify each point? 2. Have you given your opinion in the first and the final paragraph – but using different words.
CA
Paraphrase + your opinion: Online education is very important nowadays.
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In conclusion, All in all, To sum up. Why do you use this expressions?
Conclusion
Paraphrase + your opinion: Do you agree that community service works better than fines?
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What should we include in Para 5?
Summarise your ideas and repeat your opinion using different words to provide a strong conclusion.
Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Is your writing organised into clear paragraphs? 2. Have you included linking words to connect your ideas?
Organisation
Remember expressions we use to add new idea.
Furthermore, What is more, In addition, not only … but als, a further advantage of
How many paras do we write?
5
What should we include in Para 1?
ntroduce the topic using a general statement and give your opinion. Say whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
Find mistakes and make it more complex: In my opinion, teenagers shouldn’t teach other people about things, which they know very bad, they ought to teach other people and help them with things which they know good.
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First and foremost, Secondly, Lastly, Last but not the least. Why do you use this expressions?
Introduce and sequence
Paraphrase + your opinion: Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers.
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Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you included all the points from the question in your notes? 2. Is your writing too long/short?
Content
Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it better to be the oldest or the youngest in a family?
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Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?
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