REVIEW WRITING TASK 2-1 | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

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soaring/ is/ the obesity/ among/ according to/ between 13 and 19/ a/ rate/ recent survey/ adolescents/nations/ is/ in/ industrialized/ aged

According to a recent survey, the obesity rate among adolescents aged between 13 and 19 is soaring in industrialised nations

4. relax/ help/ games/ work/ efficiency/ players/ therefore/ improve/ their/ and/ afterwards

games help their players relax and therefore improve their work efficiency afterwards

several/ playing video games/ problems/ frequently/ for/ on the other hand/ players/ causes/

On the other hand, playing video games frequently causes several problems for players

will/ of/ be/ below/ in/ both/ my essay/ this argument/ sides/ discussed

Both sides of this argument will be discussed in my essay below

is/ devoting/ playing games/ means/ an increasing / and/ less/ is/ less/ amount of time/ in/ time / study/ to/ their

an increasing amount of time spent in playing games means less and less time is devoted to their studies.

1. Some people/ that/ beneficial/ is/ games/ think/ playing, while / others say that/ more disadvantageous/ video games/ are

Some people think that playing video games is beneficial to their users while others say that video games are more disadvantageous

a/ interesting/ with/ media/ is/ finally/ much more/ visiting/ library/ access

Finally, visiting a library with multiple media access is much more interesting

2. examine/ going to/ both sides / on / I / am/ of/ this argument/ my/ and / give/ opinion/ that matter/ own

I am going to examine both sides of this argument and give my own opinion on that matter

are/ highly/ one of/ to begin with/ obvious/ is/ the most/ these games/ disadvantages/ are/addictive/ that

To begin with, one of the most obvious disadvantages is that these games are highly addictive,

3. playing games/ some/ on the other hand/ merits/ has.

On the one hand, playing video games has some merits.

it/ can/ of/ the second/ distract players/ playing games/ that/ especially/ is/ from their study or work/ young people/disadvantge

The second disadvantage of playing games is that it can distract players, especially young students, from their study or work

some/ eduactional/ has/ purposes/ playing games/ besides.

Besides, playing games has some educational purposes.

time/ they/ as/ sports/ a/ have/ activities/ result/ for/ little/

As a result, they have little time for sports activities.

an/ two/ everything/ exception/ and/ has/ is/ online learning/ not/ sides

Everything has two sides, and online learning is not an exception.

many aspects/ playing video games/ All things considered/ and/ is/ both/ disadvantageous / advantageous/in

All things considered, playing video games is both advantageous and disadvantageous in many aspects.