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  • these issues influence society
    these issues PLAY A KEY ROLE IN SOCIETY
  • By doing so, this will hep AS
    By doing so, this will help US
  • Unplug electronic INSTRUMENTS
    Unplug electronic DEVICES
  • For all THIS reasons
    For all THESE reasons
  • If teenagers RECIEVE REGULAR POCKET MONEY
    If teenagers RECEIVE POCKET MONEY REGULARLY
  • Will improve A LOT
    Will improve SIGNIFICANTLY
  • And for THEY to understand it better
    And for THEM to understand it better
  • A very important THING is…
    A very important ISSUE…
  • the teenagers have the facilities
    TEENAGERS have the RESOURCES
  • Using it to CONVINCE people about…
    Using it to ENCOURAGE people about…
  • They can help or SOMETHING LIKE THAT
    They can help or SIMILAR ACTIVITIES
  • People ARE GOING TO DO these things
    People COULD DO these things
  • Teach LITTLE KIDS
    Teach CHILDREN
  • We need to CUMPLY this rule
    We need to FOLLOW this rule
  • We need to SOLUTE this problem
    We need to FACE this problem
  • We should do all of THIS THINGS
    We should do all of THESE THINGS
  • as a result of their unknowledge
    as a result of their LACK OF KNOWLEDGE
  • Children ACOSTRUMBATE to getting money
    Children GET USED TO getting money
  • to change our behaviour with climate change
    TO ENCOURAGE A BEHAVIOURAL change about climate change
  • Use bicycles instead of GO by car
    Use bicycles instead of GOING by car
  • teenagers and technology is a normal combination
    Teenagers and technology is a WELL-KNOWN combination
  • They have a VERY GOOD FORM to learn…
    They have an EXCELLENT METHOD to learn…
  • I BELIVE that if we…
    I BELIEVE that if we…
  • THIS WAY we would reduce…
    THEREFORE we would reduce…
  • Because it has more GOOD THINGS
    Because it has more ADVANTAGES
  • people need to understand the need to...
    people need to ACKNOWLEDGE the need to
  • Using RENOVABLE ENERGIES
    Using RENEWABLE RESOURCES
  • PRESENT the topic to the class
    INTRODUCE the topic to the class
  • Damage ALMOST ALL BECAUSE OF the human being
    Damage MOSTLY CAUSED BY the human being.
  • Contamination is a recent THING
    Contamination is a recent ISSUE
  • thanks to the internet...
    DUE TO technology...
  • Necessary FOR survive…
    Necessary TO survive…
  • Teenagers can think LIBERALLY WAY
    Teenagers can think INDEPENDENTLY
  • Reduce it by PUTTING OFF the lights
    Reduce it by TURNING OFF the lights
  • If it’s HIGH COST…
    if IT IS EXPENSIVE (no contractions in essays)
  • Giving pocket money is SOMETHING VERY COMMON
    Giving pocket money is A COMMON HABIT
  • Guide their CHILDRENS
    Guide their CHILDREN
  • LETTING their children
    ALLOWING their children
  • They improve, THAT’S very important skill
    They improve WHICH IS a very important skill
  • Temperatures are GETTING HIGHER
    Temperatures are INCREASING
  • ON OUR DAYS it is important…
    NOWADAYS it is important…
  • Reuse materials OF last years
    Reuse materials FROM last years
  • Damaging the ozone WALL
    Damaging the ozone LAYER
  • The PORCENT of contamination…
    The PERCENT of contamination…
  • Teach pupils with environmental PROGRAMS
    Teach pupils with environmental PROGRAMMES
  • People have opinions and different IDEAS
    People have opinions and different POINTS OF VIEW
  • TEENAGERS WRITING
  • We can save the environment YET
    We CAN’T save the environment YET (-) / We can STILL save the environment (+)
  • this kind of people don't know...
    THESE TYPE of people do not KNOW
  • We will have a GOOD environment
    We will have an IMPROVED environment
  • teenagers can teach about something
    teenagers can teach about CERTAIN TOPICS
  • This problem will GET DOWN…
    This problem will DECREASE…
  • On the other SIDE
    On the other HAND
  • Parents need to BELIEVE their children with their money
    Parents need to TRUST their children with their money
  • All the things LIKE paper, plastic…
    All the things SUCH AS paper, plastic…