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  • Her successful achievement at the science fair was well deserved.
    Remove "successful"
  • They gave advance notice that they couldn´t attend the inauguration.
    advance
  • You must present your ticket in order to claim your belongings.
    Remove "in order"
  • The home´s added bonus is the room above the garage.
    Remove "added"
  • On October 3, 1990, West Germany and East Germany united together after 45 years of division.
    Remove "together"
  • The chef has a past history of winning awards.
    Remove "past"
  • After being arrested, she argued her protest was legal and lawful.
    Remove and lawful.
  • I scheduled the meeting with a view to discuss streamlining office processes.
    Remove "with a view"
  • In her personal opinion, the project was a success.
    Remove "personal"
  • Only the exact copy of the key will open the lock.
    Remove exact.
  • The reclusive actress made headlines when she authorized a biography of her life.
    Remove "of her life"
  • The program grouped together students who had common interests.
    Remove together
  • If the castaways cooperated together, they could get off the island.
    Remove together.
  • We arrived at the festival at 12 noon.
    Remove "12"
  • The attorney had frank and honest discussions with her paralegals.
    Remove frank or honest (one of the two)
  • I wrote down ideas for the party
    Remove down
  • Our seats were in such close proximity to the stage that we could see the actors' sweat.
    Remove close
  • Guests can dock their yachts at the boat marina.
    Remove boat
  • She hopes her new innovation will be popular with consumers.
    Remove new
  • The minors were treated fairly under the provisions of the law
    Remove "the provisions of"
  • The complex choreography made it hard to follow all the kinetic action happening onstage.
    Remove kinetic
  • The added bonus of excellent writing enhanced the novel´s compelling plot.
    Remove added
  • The rough estimate I developed for my car repairs is lower than my mechanic's quote.
    Remove "rough"
  • Milton Friedman won the Nobel Prize in the field of Economic Sciences in 1976.
    Remove "the field of"
  • Our pond is a safe haven for waterfowl.
    Remove "safe"
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