Replace the phrase
Therefore
To sum up
Having looked at both sides
Overall
A topic sentence is a sentence that introduces a paragraph by presenting the one topic that will be the focus of that paragraph. What are the topic sentences of the main body paragraphs ?
Let's begin .... Secondly .... Turning to the other side of the argument .... Another issue is that ...
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On the other hand
In addition
Therefore
Another problem is that
What is the main point and the supporting example in this paragraph?
culture shock - Many people find it hard to cope with the language barrier the food and general cultural differences.
Which part of the essay is this?
Introduction
Main body
The writer's opinion
Conclusion
What's the main point of this main body paragraph?
learn to cope with foreign customs and food
chance to meet people from different cultural backgrounds
heading overseas broadens your horizons
Replace the phrase
Firstly
Having looked at both sides
I will start by
On the other hand
Put the structures of the essay in the correct order:
introduction - main body (advantages) - main body (disadvantages) - the writer's opinion - conclusion