Sometime after 400 PM, the green policy was signed; this created new problems for industry.
Missing colon in "4:00"
Revise, edit, and publish your essay; return your books to the library; and then sit quietly for the rest of the hour.
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Many gave some, some gave all.
Many gave some; some gave all.
After many nights the Johnson's arrived in Frankfurt Kentucky set up camp and roasted marshmallows this would be the first of many stops on their vacation.
After many nights, the Johnson's arrived in Frankfurt, Kentucky; set up camp; and roasted marshmallows: this would be the first of many stops on their vacation.
The ratio of water to flour was 2-1.
The ratio of water to flour was 2:1.
I have visited New Orleans, Louisiana; Orlando, Florida; and New Buffalo, Michigan.
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The creepy guy who was loitering was picked up by the police today.
The creepy guy, who was loitering, was picked up by the police today.
Jordan, Tim, and Bob ate sandwiches, and then they took a nap.
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Our trip to the store included: a visit to the deli for some beef bologna; cheese; and smoked turkey.
Our trip to the store included a visit to the deli for some beef bologna, cheese, and smoked turkey.
Disheartened the soldiers faced the real enemy starvation
Disheartened, the soldiers faced the real enemy: starvation.
I wanted milk, but we were out.
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The Bee Movie that's about a bee who talks is entertaining.
The Bee Movie, that's about a bee who talks, is entertaining.
At sunset dogs bark ferociously; cats howl; and no one sleeps.
comma needed after "sunset" (When)
Julie made sandwiches, fruit salad and pies for lunch.
Oxford comma missing after "salad"
Every morning we do these three things put our lunches on the shelf, take attendance, and go to the story rug.
Every morning we do these three things: put our lunches on the shelf, take attendance, and go to the story rug.
"Jud keep your pencil still" stated the teacher.
"Jud, keep your pencil still," stated the teacher.
Jumping off the bed little Jimmy exclaimed "I'm Superman!"
Jumping off the bed, little Jimmy exclaimed, "I'm Superman!"
After seeing the blaze there was only one thing left to do call the fire department.
After seeing the blaze, there was only one thing left to do: call the fire department.
Nearing the pond, the boys walked a bit faster; they would've run, but they had gear to carry.
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Will you Terry help the little ones get their things?
Will you, Terry, help the little ones get their things?
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