B2+ - Writing mistakes | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

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'Secondly, another enviroment that should urgently take action...'

'Secondly, another ENVIRONMENT that should urgently take action...'

'The main way of reducing the time they spend with all that gadget...'

'The main way of reducing the time they spend with all THESE GADGETS...'

'because we life in a technology society...'

'because we LIVE in a TECHNOLOGICAL society...'

'they decide how much time should their children use on screens.'

'they decide how much time THEIR CHILDREN SHOULD use on screens.'

'If a child feels encouraged to perform new activities without using a screen, he will...'

'If a child feels encouraged to perform new activities without using a screen, HE/SHE OR THEY will...'

'which can eliminate the bad content childrens could come across...'

'which can eliminate the bad content CHILDREN could come across...'

'they pick up their phones then lay down in bed...'

'they pick up their phones then LIE down in bed...'

'nobody used to use screen rather for watching tv...'

'nobody used to use A screen INSTEAD OF watching tv...'

'children are getting use to make the screens...'

'children are getting use to MAKING the screens...'