We're looking for a new accountant and it is why I am writing to you. - correct the sentence
We're looking for a new accountant and this/ that is why I am writing to you. / We're looking for a new accountant, which is why I am writing to you.
There was a long queue at the ice cream parlour because most of the children wanted it. - correct the sentence
There was a long queue at the ice cream parlour because most of the children wanted one/ some.
I'd always wanted a smartphone and when I was given it as a birthday present, I thought it was wonderful. - correct the sentence
I'd always wanted a smartphone and when I was given one as a birthday present, I thought it was wonderful.
I wasn't happy about my hotel room. I said it to the receptionist but she didn't do anything about it. - correct the sentence
I wasn't happy about my hotel room. I said so/that to the receptionist but she didn't do anything about it.
The lecturers will give you a detailed explanation of the subject. You may not be able to understand all, but you should be able to get a general idea. - correct the sentence
....You may not be able to understand everything / it all / all of it, but you should be able to get a general idea.
Some of the machines broke down quite often, but when things like these happened we just called a technician. - correct the sentence
Some of the machines broke down quite often, but when things like this happened we just called a technician.
There are several umbrellas in the stand in the hall. I'd advise you to take it if you're going for a walk. - correct the sentence
There are several umbrellas in the stand in the hall. I'd advise you to take one if you're going for a walk.
You should aim to arrive at any time that's convenient for yourself. - correct the sentence
You should aim to arrive at any time that's convenient for you.
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