Where Danny and his father lived?
Where did Danny and his father live?
Danny was exciting and scary when he drove the car
Danny was excited and scared when he drove the car. (Driving the car was exciting and scary).
Danny’s father wants to poach so many pheasants that there will be any left for the party.
...there won't be any left for the party. OR there will be none left for the party.
My job was to care about my grandparents’ chickens. (WC)
My job was to take care of my grandparents' chickens.
I'm not agree that a man can't take care of babies.
I don't agree that a man can't take care of babies.
I very like movies, and I am watching movies almost every night.
I really like movies, and I watch movies almost every night. (OR I like movies a lot...)
He's father teached Danny about take apart engines.
His father taught Danny about taking apart engines.
My mom was afraid to letting me alone at home.
My mom was afraid of leaving me alone at home. (OR ... letting me stay home alone.)
My mom was very protector to me.
My mom was very protective of me.
It was very exciting and scary to driving a car
It was very exciting and scary to drive a car
The first time I drove, I was worried about I missed the right exit.
The first time I drove a car, I was worried about missing the right exit.
When I had 19 years old, I want to be an astronaut.
When I was 19 years old, I wanted to be an astronaut.
This quote reminds me my childhood.
This quote reminds me of my childhood.
My friends and me had too much fun at the party. I was a great evening. (PRON, WC)
My friends and I had a lot of fun... so much fun... (too much fun = negative)
Why the author wrote about poaching in a children’s book?
Why did the author write about poaching in a children's book?
Mr. Hazell didn’t polite to Danny when he pumped gas.
Mr. Hazell wasn't polite to Danny when he pumped gas.
He found out his father fall into a pit.
... his father had fallen into a pit. (... his father fell into a pit.)
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drives.
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drive.
When Danny was very young, his father let him drove cars into the workshop.
... let him drive cars...
In chapter 9, Doc Spencer told his method of poaching pheasants.
...told Danny about his method...
When my first time to drive in the US, I was frightened by the speed of the other cars.
The first time I drove... , When I first drove in the US...
I like living in a caravan, because my families are with me. (VT, S/PL)
I would like living in a caravan, because my family would be with me