In conclusion, both knowledge and experience have advantages, and we should using both in the workplace.
In conclusion, both knowledge and experience have advantages, and we should use both in the workplace.
Experiences are teach us how to solve the real problems on the job.
Experiences teach us how to solve real problems on the job.
Lack of experience can effect negatively the performance of employees.
affect smth / have a negative effect on smth
Many people thinks that experience is more better than knowledge.
Many people think that experience is better than knowledge.
Many workers rely in their experience instead of studying new knowledge.
to rely on
Such fields as science require theoretical, which is a good base for employers.
theoretical knowledge
The employees with only knowledge cannot do the practical tasks efficiently compare to experienced workers.
compared to
Overall, I think both are important, and people should have knowledge and experience for doing job.
to do a job / the job
Knowledge can be got from school, but experience is learn by doing.
Knowledge can be gained/learned from school, but experience is gained/learned by doing.
This essay will discuss both view and argue that ...
both views