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Your faithfully / Your sincerely (1 mistake)

Yours faithfully / Yours sincerely

Moreover, I am very friendly and hardworker (1 mistake).

Moreover, I am very friendly and hardworking.

I have many experience working for online stores (1 mistake).

I have a lot of experience working for online stores.

I was writing with regard of a purchase that I made on your website last month (1 mistake).

I was writing with regard to a purchase that I made on your website last month.

I bought a jeans for €35, that have a lot of holes (2 mistakes).

I bought a pair of jeans for €35, which have a lot of holes.

It also cost me 5€, wich it is an error (3 mistakes).

It also cost me €5, which is an error.

I look forward to get an answer (1 mistake).

I look forward to getting an answer.

I am writing this to recive a refound (2 mistakes).

I am writing this to receive a refund (2 mistakes).

I think I am the ideal person to win this place in your company (rephrase). 2 points.

I think I am the ideal person for this position in your company.

I could create a comfortable enviroment for all the employees in the company (1 mistake).

I could create a comfortable environment for all the employees in the company (1 mistake).

I am very good on maths and managing logistics (1 mistake).

I am very good at maths and managing logistics (1 mistake).

In your website, you promise that the trousers will be delivered in 22 of desember (7 mistakes).

On your website, you promised that the trousers would be delivered on 22nd of December (7 mistakes).

Additionally, I would advised you that I will make my job with bicycle (3 mistakes).

Additionally, I would like to inform you that I will do my job by bicycle.

I have a charming voice that likes the most of the people (rephrase). 2 points.

I have a charming voice that is liked by most people.

I don't know how is it possible but when I recived my package.... (2 mistakes).

I don't know how this is possible but when I received my package.... (2 mistakes).

I know how to control stressfull situations, such as the week of sails (2 mitakes).

I know how to control stressful situations, such as the week of sales.