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FCE essay writing - tips and error corrections

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  • Which word or phrase is different?
    Furthermore
    Additionally
    Consequently
    Also
  • Correct it: 'Some of the courses they could offer are cooking, first aid, survival skills...'
    'Some of the courses they could offer are cooking, first aid AND/OR survival skills.' (Please never use '...' in ANY writing!)
  • Correct it: If the issue will not be addressed soon, the problems will continue to grow.
    If the issue IS not addressed soon, the problems will... (Conditionals are a great way to improve your writing score - memorise the structures!)
  • How many paragraphs should your essay contain?
    5 (intro, point 1, point 2, your own idea and conclusion)
  • Correct it: Since many governments do not actually recycle what they collect, is not as helpful as people think.
    Since many governments do not actually recycle what they collect, IT is not as helpful as people think. (Check for missing subjects - especially 'IT'!)
  • Fill the gap: Many students are unable to find work, despite _____ their university degrees,
    to obtain
    obtaining
    they obtained
    obtain
  • You should never start a sentence with 'and' or 'but'. What could you use instead?
    'Also' (instead of 'and') or 'however' (instead of 'but').
  • Should your essay be formal or informal?
    Formal
  • Which is better for an essay? Why?: 'One must not overlook the important of education.' OR 'The importance of education must not be overlooked.'
    The second - both are formal, but it sounds more advanced to use the passive structure, so try to include the passive in all your essays!
  • Should essay paragraphs have subtitles?
    No!
  • Correct it: If public transport would be cheaper, more people would use it.
    If public transport WERE cheaper, more people would use it. (Conditionals are a great way to improve your writing score - memorise the structures!)
  • Fill the gap: Travelling abroad offers many advantages, ___ it can be expensive.
    however
    unless
    despite
    although
  • How long do you have to write your essay?
    ~ 40 mins. FCE writing is 90 mins, and you have 2 texts to write, meaning about 45 minutes per text. Ideally, leave 5 minutes per text to check your work.
  • Which is better for an essay an why?: 'In my opinion, that is not a practical solution.' OR 'That does not seem to be a practical solution.'
    The second option, because you should avoid personal pronouns (like 'I' and 'my') in your essay, and not offer your personal opinion.
  • ___ teachers ___ students has much control over the syllabus, which may be a mistake.
    Not / or
    Either / or
    Neither / nor
    Neither / and
  • Correct it: The impacts of that different types of technology are rarely considered.
    The impacts of THOSE different types of technology are rarely considered. (be careful with THIS, THAT, THESE and THOSE. Always check your writing!)
  • How many words should an essay be for FCE?
    140-190 words
  • Which word/phrase is different?
    since
    as
    according to
    because
  • Which of the following should you not include in an essay?
    the passive voice
    conditionals
    phrasal verbs
    linking words
  • Which word or phrase is different?
    In spite of that
    Even so
    Nonetheless
    Furthermore