Alana, whose father is an archaeologist has traveled, to Egypt.
Alana, whose father is an archaeologist, has traveled to Egypt.
You should have gotten permission, first, however.
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He told them "The serial number is 10322411."
He told them, "The serial number is 10322411."
To date record sales have raised $9 500 280 for charity.
To date, record sales have raised $9 500 280 for charity.
Everyone hollered, hooted, back-slapped and jumped into the air.
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Today's date is January 16 2018.
Today's date is January 16, 2018.
On July 20 1969 astronauts landed on the moon for the first time.
On July 20, 1969, astronauts landed on the moon for the first time.
The student, who won the scholarship, is my brother.
The student who won the scholarship is my brother.
Someone that I met at your party once lived in Ireland.
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We will be visiting Annapolis, Maryland on May 20, 2018.
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The fan cheering the loudest is my mom.
The fan, cheering the loudest, is my mom.
"Coal is just one of many sources of energy," responded Chris.
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Lost and frightened the child, began to cry.
Lost and frightened, the child began to cry.
On June 14, 2018, my sister will be eighteen.
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The police keeping well out of sight followed the suspect for two miles.
The police, keeping well out of sight, followed the suspect for two miles.