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  • belive
    beliEve
  • Maybe is better...
    Maybe IT is better...
  • You get so bored.
    'So' is too informal and 'you' is too personal.
  • It has helped us many times.
    It has helped us A LOT/ ENORMOUSLY/ TREMENDOUSLY, etc.
  • althought
    although
  • know other cultures
    learn about other cultures
  • do friends
    make friends
  • moviles
    mobiles
  • Also, people think that...
    In addition, As well as this, (Also = informal)
  • entretainment
    entertainment
  • Internet has changed our lives.
    THE internet...
  • Others think is a waste of time.
    Others think IT is a waste of time.
  • It depends of...
    It depends ON...
  • in one hand
    ON one hand
  • ... people that they are...
    ...people THAT are...
  • You can speak to friends, look at photos of friends and make friends.
    You can speak to friends, look at THEIR photos and make NEW ONES.
  • Technology only has affected us...
    Technology has ONLY affected us...
  • differents aspects
    We don't pluralise adjectives in English.
  • Most of teenagers...
    Most teenagers...
  • My favourites books.
    My favourite books.
  • But, others think it is not like this.
    However, Yet, While, Although ('but' is a conjunction)
  • Now, people use the internet...
    Nowadays, These days, (Now is too informal)
  • It is good.
    It is excellent/ phenomenal,etc. (This is B2, b**ches!)
  • It makes easier to understand.
    It makes IT easier to understand.
  • You always can find something.
    You can always find something.
  • search information
    search FOR information
  • it'll don't aren't hasn't, etc.
    NO CONTRACTIONS!
  • I'm going to talk about technology.
    I know you are. I set the homework, remember?
  • Technology made a positive contribution to society.
    Technology HAS made a positive contribution to society.
  • Other thing is that...
    Another thing is that...
  • this things
    THESE things