On the one hand, In contrast, in spite of (+ noun/ gerund/the fact that …) , However,/ Nevertheless
Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Is your writing organised into clear paragraphs? 2. Have you included linking words to connect your ideas?
Organisation
Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?
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Paraphrase + your opinion: Do you agree that community service works better than fines?
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Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you included all the points from the question in your notes? 2. Is your writing too long/short?
Content
How many paras do we write?
5
What should we include in Para 1?
Introduce the topic using a general statement and then get specific
Find mistakes and make it more complex: In my opinion, teenagers shouldn’t teach other people about things, which they know very bad, they ought to teach other people and help them with things which they know good.
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Paraphrase + your opinion: Online education is very important nowadays.
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Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you given a clear reason to justify each point? 2. Have you given your opinion in the final paragraph and does it align with what you said?
CA
Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it better to be the oldest or the youngest in a family?
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What should we include in Para 5?
Summarise your ideas and repeat your opinion using different words to provide a strong conclusion.
Content, CA, Organisation or Language: 1. Are the words you used what is expected at your level? 2. Did you use basic grammar successfully and use harder ones like passives and conditionals?
Language
First and foremost, Secondly, Lastly, Last but not the least. Why do you use this expressions?
Introduce and sequence
Remember expressions we use to add new idea.
Furthermore, What is more, In addition, not only … but als, a further advantage of
Paraphrase + your opinion: Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers.
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In conclusion, All in all, To sum up. Why do you use this expressions?
Conclusion
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