Jason and Leo - Great Writing | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

0%

0 0 0

Back Restart

Why is peer editing a good idea?

tell me a good argument essay topic

make this less wordy: "the reason why is"

because

what is a topic sentence?

Correcting sentences One of the biggest problem facing children today is the number of advertisements they are exposing to. (2 mistakes)

One of the biggest problems facing children today is the number of advertisements they are exposed to.

What does prevalent mean, uncommon or common?

Common

Combining sentences a) There were rumors. b) The rumors were about the new Vice President. c) The rumors were mean and untrue.

There were rumors about the new Vice President which were mean and untrue.

what is your favourite type of essay to write and why?

He like to swim,playing basketball with his friends,and playing piano.Find what two type of mistake is this

parallel structure and subject verb agreement

what are the two things you could focus on in a cause-effect essay?

causes or effects

what is the verb form of 'appreciation'?

appreciate

Correcting sentences Den.G., a 10-years-old girl, get her robotic prosthesus put on. (3 mistakes)

Den.G., a 10-year-old girl, gets her robotic prosthesis put on.

solve the redundancy: collaborate together

collaborate

make this less wordy: "in the event that"

if

what are the 4 things you could present in your conclusion?

opinion, suggestion, prediction, question

when you make a counter argument, what do you need to do next?

REFUTE IT!

Everyone loves to eat watermelon,so everyone think that watermelon is heathy too.（Hint,it is in an argument essay) Find what type of mistake is this

faulty logic.

name the 5 essays we have looked at in GW4

argument, cause-effect, problem-solution, reaction, comparison

what is something important you should do in the conclusion of your problem-solution essay?

give a call to action!

solve the redundancy: free gift

gift

If clause Choose: General/ Future real/ Present or Future unreal/ Past unreal We could have a nap if the school bus was faster.

Past unreal

what food did we compare an essay/paragrapgh to?

a burger!

If clause Choose: General/ Future real/ Present or Future unreal/ Past unreal If the restaurant opened at 6:00 p.m., we would eat supper there.

Present or Future unreal

solve the redundancy: unexpected surprise

surprise

tell me two connectors that show COMPARISON

similarly, in addition, likewise, compared to

what is the job of a thesis statement?

what are some good examples of a hook?

quote, statistic, question, annecdote

Correcting sentences Heavy usages of social media are often negative affected by it. (2 mistakes)

Heavy users of social media are often negatively affected by it.

What does recognition mean, concept or acknowledgment?

Acknowledgment

tell me two connectors that show CONTRAST

however, nevertheless, on the other hand, in contrast, although, even though, unlike

what are the three parts of an essay?

introduction, body, conclusion

Noun phrase -> Noun clause: He doesn’t know the location of the lecture.

He doesn’t know where the lecture is.

What does lenient mean, compassionate or courageous?

Compassionate

which paragraph does the thesis statement normally go in?

introduction

Find what type of essay is this of the following title."Watermelon or Apple"

argument essay

If clause Choose: General/ Future real/ Present or Future unreal/ Past unreal If KFC is the only option for dinner, then we eat KFC.

General

why should you restate the thesis statement in the conclusion?