Correct? The tunnel had torches on both sides of the wall. Even with that, the tunnel was very dark. At this point, Louis has little to nothing hope of surviving this.
Incorrect: comma splices
Hot, loud and dusty, the once empty street slowly comes alive with the morning bustle as the smell of fresh roti fills the air.
staccato/rule of three and sensory
Correct or incorrect: The blade seems to have its own thoughts, I am still learning how to control and use it, it is not that easy!
Incorrect: comma splices
explicit vs implicit meaning
explicit: surface /literal meaning; implicit: deeper /unsaid meaning
Name 5 ways to vary your sentence openers
ed/ing/simile/preposition/adverb/connector
The setting sun’s dimming light cast its dying rays out across the shimmering ocean; the luminous shades of amber cling to the horizon
sensory/personification
Name 4 features of travel writing
vivid description/opinion of writer changes or learn something/uses range of devices/first person/responses/compares to other places their world
Lights spread like sequins on an evening gown, twinkling in the calm darkness, only the sound of gentle movements filled the air..
simile / sensory
Name 5 features of a dystopian world
authoritative ruler/oppressed society/environment destroyed/ chaos / ruled by violence and fear/constantly monitored/tries to look like a utopian societyy somet
Give three examples of themes
nature vs man/inequality/love / money vs happiness / power/greed etc
Name 4 rules when writing dialogue
new line new person/no need to always include the name of the character if it is the same/obvious/quotation marks/punctuation /