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Good sentences are more than grammatical units that communicate ideas; they please and interest readers as well.

Sentence

My friend is not a good student he lies to his teacher to hangout with me.

Run-on sentence

My crush was asking me out on a date, I woke up.

When my crush was asking me out on a date, I woke up.

Vitu loves to watch oggy and cockroaches , He always watches it after class.

Comma Splice

Utey bought Burger for his dinner ChanBoth found he ate it.

Utey bought Burger for his dinner, but ChanBoth found and ate it.

Our Netflix subscription just ran out nobody remembered to renew it.

Our Netflix subscription just ran out. Nobody remembered to renew it.

I hear a girl singing from the bathroom no one is at home.

I hear a girl singing from the bathroom, but no one is at home.

Panha made coffee for his girlfriend as an apology The coffee was salty he mistaked salt for sugar.

Panha made coffee for his girlfriend as an apology. However, the coffee was salty because he mistaked salt for sugar.

It is against the law to talk on the phone while driving, nevertheless, people do it.

Comma splice

I saw a girl with long hair in the mirror at 3 AM , I closed my eyes and slept.

Comma splice

My neighbors are very caring they pay attention to me everyday.

Run-on sentence

I went to see my crush with an intention to confess to her, I got a wedding invitation from her.

I went to see my crush with an intention to confess to her, yet I got a wedding invitation from her.

I was too lazy to bring an umbrella , i stepped out of my home the rain started to pour.

I was too lazy to bring an umbrella. When I stepped out of my home, the rain started to pour.

Apsara is a classical form of dance; it has been performed for many years.

Sentence

Bitter melon can be prepared in many ways, my favorite is to eat it raw.

Comma Splice

He won a lottery, he lost the ticket for claiming the money.

He won a lottery, but he lost the ticket for claiming the money.

I washed the dishes for 3 hours straight, the restaurant manager let me go home.

I washed the dishes for 3 hours straight. Therefore, the restaurant manager let me go home.

Naomy can’t explain her feelings, she just wants to be left alone.

Comma Splice

When inventors first began to design typewriters, their machines were much different from today’s.

Sentence

I haven’t eaten all day, I ordered a lot of expensive food I forgot to bring my wallet and phone.

I haven’t eaten all day, so I ordered a lot of expensive food. However, I forgot to bring my wallet and phone.

Everyone should be polite;however, many people are rude.

Correct Sentence

I have many assignments, I decide to sleep.

Comma splice

Pagnareth hates cooking, his crush loves to eat homemade food.

Comma splice

I don’t like the climate of the area where I live it is way too hot.

Run-on sentence

The first bus was an hour late the second was two hour late.

Run-on sentence