The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "orderly" in the sentence?
eventful
tranquil
neutral
calmly
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
Because
For instance
Consequently
At the same time
The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
Sentence 4
Sentence 3
Sentence 5
Sentence 2
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
I walking my dog, feeding him, and loving him.
I walk my dog, feed him, and to love him.
I walk my dog while feeding him and love him.
I walk my dog, feed him, and love him.
The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "damaged" in the sentence?
illness
injured
mournful
sadly
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
Revising this sentence needs help, so ask for it.
Ask for help if you need help revising this sentence.
If you need help revising this sentence, you should ask.
If you need help with this sentence, ask for help.
What is the most effective closing sentence for this paragraph?
All the other kids were much better than me.
Luckily, my karate teacher was patient and kind.
Now I know learning karate takes practice and hard work.
That karate class was actually a lot of fun.
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
Change "boasted" to "bragged"
Change "he" to "Ollie"
Change "Ollie's brother" to "Him"
Change "competition" to "game"
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
The park was filled with the musical singing of song birds.
The park was filled with musical singing of birds singing.
The park was filled with the musical sound of birds singing.
The birds filled the park with sounds of singing and songs.
What would be an effective controlling idea to add at the end of this paragraph?
If you want to learn a new skill, take a risk and try it!
You can't do anything if you just sit quietly and read it.
You won't get anywhere if you don't try it yourself.
Learning something new means you have to learn it.
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
As a result
Consequently
In addition
For example
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
Drawing, singing; she likes to dance
She likes to draw and singing with dancing.
She likes drawing, singing, and dancing.
She likes drawing, to sing, and dancing.
The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
Sentence 3
Sentence 5
Sentence 2
Sentence 4
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
Change "disappointed" to "saddened"
Change "the game" to "it"
Change "canceled" to "ended"
Change "they" to "the team"