The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
Sentence 2
Sentence 5
Sentence 4
Sentence 3
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
I walk my dog, feed him, and to love him.
I walking my dog, feeding him, and loving him.
I walk my dog, feed him, and love him.
I walk my dog while feeding him and love him.
The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "orderly" in the sentence?
neutral
eventful
tranquil
calmly
What is the most effective closing sentence for this paragraph?
Now I know learning karate takes practice and hard work.
All the other kids were much better than me.
That karate class was actually a lot of fun.
Luckily, my karate teacher was patient and kind.
The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "damaged" in the sentence?
mournful
injured
sadly
illness
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
For instance
Consequently
At the same time
Because
What would be an effective controlling idea to add at the end of this paragraph?
Learning something new means you have to learn it.
If you want to learn a new skill, take a risk and try it!
You won't get anywhere if you don't try it yourself.
You can't do anything if you just sit quietly and read it.
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
Change "canceled" to "ended"
Change "they" to "the team"
Change "disappointed" to "saddened"
Change "the game" to "it"
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
As a result
In addition
For example
Consequently
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
Change "Ollie's brother" to "Him"
Change "competition" to "game"
Change "boasted" to "bragged"
Change "he" to "Ollie"
The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
Sentence 4
Sentence 3
Sentence 2
Sentence 5
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
The birds filled the park with sounds of singing and songs.
The park was filled with musical singing of birds singing.
The park was filled with the musical singing of song birds.
The park was filled with the musical sound of birds singing.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
If you need help revising this sentence, you should ask.
If you need help with this sentence, ask for help.
Revising this sentence needs help, so ask for it.
Ask for help if you need help revising this sentence.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
She likes to draw and singing with dancing.
She likes drawing, to sing, and dancing.
Drawing, singing; she likes to dance
She likes drawing, singing, and dancing.