Content, Communicative
Achievement, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you given a clear reason to justify each point? 2. Have you given your opinion in the first and the final paragraph – but using different words.
CA
Paraphrase + your opinion: Online education is very important nowadays.
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Content, Communicative
Achievement Organisation or Language: 1. Is your writing organised into clear paragraphs? 2. Have you included linking words to connect your ideas?
Organisation
What should we include in Paragraph 1?
ntroduce the topic using a general statement and give your opinion. Say whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?
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Paraphrase + your opinion: Is it better to be the oldest or the youngest in a family?
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Paraphrase + your opinion: Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers.
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Remember expressions we use to add new idea.
Furthermore, What is more, In addition, not only … but als, a further advantage of
Find mistakes and make it more complex: In my opinion, teenagers shouldn’t teach other people about things, which they know very bad, they ought to teach other people and help them with things which they know good.
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In conclusion, All in all, To sum up. Why do you use this expressions?
Conclusion
Content, Communicative
Achievement, Organisation or Language: 1. Have you included all the points from the question in your notes? 2. Is your writing too long/short?
Content
How many paras do we write?
5
First and foremost, Secondly, Lastly, Last but not the least. Why do you use this expressions?
Introduce and sequence
Remember expressions we use to make a contrast.
On the one hand, In contrast, in spite of (+ noun/ gerund/the fact that …) , However,/ Nevertheless
Paraphrase + your opinion: Do you agree that community service works better than fines?
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What should we include in Paragraph 5?
Summarise your ideas and repeat your opinion using different words to provide a strong conclusion.
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