Today we have no sun.
wrong (... IS NOT SUNNY)
If you're looking for a house, this is the best place for you.
right
We have another small bedroom close to the living room.
right
The street is with a lot of nature.
wrong (the street HAS...)
This is a picture of a service room.
wrong (LAUNDRY AREA)
2 bedrooms share a balcony.
right
The place where I live is noisy.
right
The apartment is very brightly all day.
wrong (BRIGHT)
With the living room have an American kitchen.
wrong (THERE IS an...)
There are 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms and 1 big kitchen.
right
If you're looking for a big house, call me for you to visit it.
wrong (SO you can...)
The sun really shine here all day long.
wrong (SHINES)
if you like soccer, is the best place for you.
wrong (IT IS the best...)
My apartment is in a condo at the third floor.
wrong (ON the 3rd floor)