If you're looking for a big house, call me for you to visit it.
wrong (SO you can...)
if you like soccer, is the best place for you.
wrong (IT IS the best...)
2 bedrooms share a balcony.
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The place where I live is noisy.
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My apartment is in a condo at the third floor.
wrong (ON the 3rd floor)
The sun really shine here all day long.
wrong (SHINES)
The street is with a lot of nature.
wrong (the street HAS...)
Today we have no sun.
wrong (... IS NOT SUNNY)
This is a picture of a service room.
wrong (LAUNDRY AREA)
With the living room have an American kitchen.
wrong (THERE IS an...)
We have another small bedroom close to the living room.
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If you're looking for a house, this is the best place for you.
right
The apartment is very brightly all day.
wrong (BRIGHT)
There are 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms and 1 big kitchen.
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