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Having looked at both sides
Firstly
On the other hand
I will start by
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Another problem is that
Therefore
In addition
On the other hand
Which part of the essay is this?
Main body
Introduction
Conclusion
The writer's opinion
What is the main point and the supporting example in this paragraph?
culture shock - Many people find it hard to cope with the language barrier the food and general cultural differences.
What's the main point of this main body paragraph?
chance to meet people from different cultural backgrounds
learn to cope with foreign customs and food
heading overseas broadens your horizons
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Overall
To sum up
Therefore
Having looked at both sides
A topic sentence is a sentence that introduces a paragraph by presenting the one topic that will be the focus of that paragraph. What are the topic sentences of the main body paragraphs ?
Let's begin .... Secondly .... Turning to the other side of the argument .... Another issue is that ...
Put the structures of the essay in the correct order:
introduction - main body (advantages) - main body (disadvantages) - the writer's opinion - conclusion