B21 Essay Common Errors | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

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Many people think about how is the life of a celebrity.

Many people think about WHAT THE LIFE OF A CELEBRITY IS LIKE.

Furthermore, you will be exposed to a lot of critics and hate that you will must get used to them.

Furthermore, you will be exposed to a lot of critics and hate that you will HAVE TO get used to.

In addition is very difficult for the celebrities going to public places, because every body can recognise you.

In addition, IT is very difficult for the celebrities TO GO to public places, because every body can recognise THEM.

There a lot of people that would like to be a celebrity but do they really know that being a celebrity means?

There ARE a lot of people that would like to be a celebrity but do they really know WHAT being a celebrity means?

However, not all are good things.

However, not NOT EVERYTHING IS GREAT.

... but their lifes have many advantages too

...but their LIVES have many advantages too

If some famous person went to a restaurant he or she would be considerate in another way than if he or she were an unpopular person.

If some famous person went to a restaurant he or she would be TREATED in another way than if he or she were an unpopular person.

I think that not everything is positive.

I DON'T THINK THAT everything is positive.

They think that being watched every time is gratifying

They think that being watched ALL THE time is gratifying

But there isn’t only advantages, they have some disadvantages too,

But there AREN'T only advantages, THERE ARE some disadvantages too,

On the contrary, there are many advantage.

On the contrary, there are many advantageS.

For example, if a well-known person ask people to do something, everyone who follow him or her would do that.

For example, if a well-known person askS people to do something, everyone who followS him or her would do that.

I would have privileges, for example enter in place where no one can go or collaborate with my favourites brands.

I would have privileges, for example ENTERING A place where no one can go or COLLABORATING with my FAVOURITE brands.

Also I very shy.

I'm also very shy.

Although, your audience is not close to you at all.

HOWEVER, your audience is not close to you at all.

Being famous is everything that a normal people wants to be in life.

Being famous is everything that a normal PERSON wants to be in life.

For example, this is the case of Lionel Messi which works with Adidas.

For example, this is the case of Lionel Messi, WHO works with Adidas.

If I were famous I could not have a private life and people talk about me.

If I were famous I could not have a private life and people WOULD talk about me

To sump up, be a celebrity has both advantages and disadvantages.

To SUM up, BEING a celebrity has both advantages and disadvantages.