She feels nervous, scary and confused. IS IT CORRECT?
the answer is Scared! because she feels scared, she isn't a ghost!
The man had a photo of she and her cousin playing outside. IS IT CORRECT?
The answer is a photo OF HER!
Then mom confused said: ’What cousin?’ IS IT CORRECT?
There's no commas! Correct the word order.
Her mother answered: ’I heard a noise and quickly I check.’
The answer is CHECKED!
Emily excited exclaimed: ’The one behind you’
The information about her being excited is not important! Emily, excited, exclaimed
Its toll her good night and sweet dreams. IS IT CORRECT?
The answer is TOLD with LD
Emily woke up, saw mother, and asked.IS IT CORRECT?
The answer is HER mother! Be specific!
She thinks the shadow was her cousin. IS IT CORRECT?
The answer is Thought! Was is in past simple..