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  • How can you combine these 2 sentences? I love to eat cookies and cake. I don't like eating veggies.
    I love to eat cookies and cake, but I don't like to eat veggies.
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? some teachers like to cook
    some=Some and a period should be added
  • Restate the prompt. Explain why the sun is the center of the universe.
    The sun is the center of the universe because
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Did you see her run quicker to school
    quicker=quickly and needs a question mark
  • Explain your opinion about why kids should or should not eat vegetables.
    Kids should eat vegetables because or Kids should not eat vegetables.
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Miny teachers in this school have hobbys.
    Miny=Many and hobbys=hobbies
  • What would be a better way to write these sentences? I have a great job at the school. I would like to work at the candy factory.
    I have a great job at the school, but I would like to work at the candy factory.
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? i rubed my eyes really hard.
    i=I and rubed=rubbed
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? My car is biggest than you'res.
    biggest=bigger and you'res=yours
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? They bought cars for myself and I loved them.
    myself=me and comma after me
  • Use a more specific word than made in this sentence. Hannah's hard work paid off because she made more than $400 in 3 hours.
    earned
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? I go to school yesterday for 3 ours.
    go=went and ours=hours
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Mrs. scott loves sloths and she loves to read books.
    scott=Scott and a comma after sloths
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? The african countries see a lot of warmm weather.
    african=African and warmm=warm
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Your going to love this class
    Your=You're and needs a period
  • Restate the prompt: Explain how the zebra got its stripes.
    The zebra got its stripes by...
  • Revise this to make it sound better. I like to wear polka dots. I like to wear stripes.
    I like to wear polka dots and stripes.
  • Restate the prompt. Explain why teachers work on the weekends.
    Teachers work on the weekend because
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? I rann around the playground for fell down.
    rann=ran and for=and
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Mom said, i am so happy to see you here."
    i-I and quotation marks before i
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? Is this yours car
    yours=your and needs a question mark
  • What 2 things need to be corrected in this sentence? The civil war was in the 1800s
    civil war=Civil War and needs a period