I am writing in regard to the new funding that has been allocated for local development of youth facilities. That said, I would like to suggest how the funds could be spent.
That said = however
In conclusion, [a letter]
This should be used in an essay, not a letter.
... concerning the upcoming funding that is capable of expanding our fitness facilities.
will enable us to expand
Since it was constructed, considerable number of local people have ...
a considerable number
As for what facilities could be implemented, our main suggestions are ...
provided
It might be a possibility to provide some outdoor fitness machines.
It might be possible to provide
In consequence, the funding will be warmly welcomed by the young local community.
Consequently / As a result,
A lack of sports facilities has been highlighted as an area of concern.
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