4B Proofreading Unit 1 2024 | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

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Is this sentence ok, or must it be corrected? "Normally when I am in a high pressure situation I try to be calm breathing slowly and drink water if is possible. "

Issues: Punct, verb form, pronoun. "Normally when I am in a high pressure situation, I try to be calm by breathing slowly and drinking water if it's possible"

Is this sentence ok, or must it be corrected? "To deal with high-pressure situations it’s a good idea to go to therapy. "

This sentence is fine!

Is this sentence ok, or must it be corrected? "I am a very anxious person and it has been becoming more and more troublesome as time passes.""

Correction: Verb use, wordiness; To keep the meaning the same and improve clarity: "I am a very anxious person, and it becomes more troublesome as time passes"

Is this sentence ok, or must it be corrected? "In terapy people can learn a few practices that can make them relax, as deep breathing."

Correction: Punctuation, spelling and use of linking word. "In therapy, people can learn a few practices that can make them relax, such as deep breathing."

Is this sentence ok, or must it be corrected? "I can think of many ways in order to deal better with stress."

It's ok. But you could improve it for clarity: "I can think of many ways to deal better with stress."