Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 4. Hong Kong offers the best Chinese food in the world.
Wrong. This sentence uses 'the best' without giving any evidence. It is easy to disagree with this statement.
Give an example of an ADJECTIVE you can use for hedging
possible, some, many, most, ...
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 3. This is undoubtedly because Hong Kong students' family members are Cantonese speakers.
Wrong. This sentence uses 'undoubtedly', but some family members may speak other languages or other Chinese dialects.
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 7. There is strong evidence that academic exchanges improve the language skills of students.
Correct. This sentence contains a hedging noun: "evidence".
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 8. Monash University students are predominantly English speakers.
Correct. This sentence contains a hedging adverb: "predominantly" (meaning mostly).
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 6. It is possible that students have relatives in English-speaking countries.
Correct. "possible" is a hedging adjective.
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 2. The evidence proves that undergraduates rarely communicate with their parents or grandparents in English.
Wrong. There is a lack of hedging language and "proves" is too strong a word. This sentence over-emphasises the claim for the quality of the evidence.
Give an example of an ADVERB you can use for hedging
possibly, likely, perhaps, often, usually, sometimes
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 9. It is an iron law that nothing can go faster than light.
Wrong. This sentence contains an overly-assertive or absolute expression: "an iron law that..."
Give an example of a VERB you can use for hedging
may (not), might (not), can, could, seem to, appear to, tend to, indicate, suggest, contribute, ...
True or false? Words such as will, undeniable, is, and definitely make the writing too absolute. Readers may easily challenge these statements because there may be many alternative points of view.
true
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 10. The lack of solar power stations in Melbourne proves that Melbourne is not suitable for solar power.
Wrong. There are no hedging words, and "proves" is too strong.
True or false? In academic writing, writers don't need to discuss points which are not usually so definite, and which are often debatable.
false
True or false? It is important, when you are not 100% certain of a point you are making, to use hedging in your academic writing.
true
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 5. Monash University students probably go on an excursion at least once in their university life.
Correct. "probably" is a hedging word.
Is this sentence correctly hedged or not? 1. On the evidence of the findings presented in Figure 1, it would appear that tertiary students in Hong Kong generally have little need to speak in English outside the classroom.
Correct. This sentence contains hedging in 'it would appear that'.
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