The bright sound of Christmas bells echoed through our 4-storey bungalow.
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His parents forced him to do the exam assesment books.
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A shiver ran down her spine.
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Ring! The alerm clock striked.
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Not long after, it was time to sing the birthday song and my mom brought out the present and then when my brother opened his present I saw that he got a to car so I thought I would get something better because it was my birthday
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The girls showed the boys they meant business by attacking them.
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He looked at my present and was green with envy.
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When we were setting up, something broke the silence, It was our uncle.
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Maybe life wasn't unfair after all.
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I whispered excitedly as I looked out the window to see a beautiful scenary.
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