I listen to music everyday. (spelling)
every day
When I was walking, my parents where listening to the sounds of the forest. (spelling)
were
We must take some risk. (grammar)
We must take some risks.
We should also keep attention to people's allergies. (wrong word)
We should also pay attention to people's allergies.
When we enter in it, I saw some bats on the wall and then my dad turn on the lights. (grammar)
entered, turned
For an example, I have a little ritual before I go to sleep. (grammar)
for example
We ran immediatly out of that cave. (spelling)
immediately
My mum teach me all the things I know about cooking. (grammar)
teaches
In the cave we founded a lot of strange animals and insects. (grammar)
found
I like classical music even if some people say classical music is boring. (repetition)
...some people say it is boring.
There was darkness every where. (spelling)
everywhere
I think that everyone at least like a song or two. (word order)
I think that everyone likes at least a song or two.
We should try a different food. (grammar)
no article (a)
I live whit my headphones on. (spelling)
with
I think would be better to cook for from English-speaking countries. (grammar)
I think it would be better to cook for from English-speaking countries.
My favourite kind of music is rapper. (wrong word)
rap
There are two people allergic at chocolate. (grammar)
There are two people allergic to chocolate.
I prefer making food from English speaking countries than making Italian food.(grammar)
I prefer making food from English speaking countries to making Italian food.