Cae 1 December Exam Essay | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

What's more is easier and more practical to shop online x2

What IS more IT is easier and more practical to shop online

Shopping in a mall is still popular. Even though, online shopping is gaining popularity x1

Shopping in a mall is still popular. HOWEVER/NEVERTHELESS, online shopping is gaining popularity

Instead of go to a shopping centre , many people prefer to shop at home x1

Instead of GOING to a shopping centre , many people prefer to shop at home

Shopping also can be a disconnection for some of us x2

Shopping can ALSO be a way to unwind for some of us( unwind= formal switch off = informal)

The cost is something really important which influences a lot the consumer x2

The cost is A REALLY IMPORTANT FACTOR WHICH INFLUENCES THE CONSUMER A LOT

There are many different reasons why are changing our ways of shopping x1

There are many different reasons why OUR WAYS OF SHOPPING ARE CHANGING

Both of these aspects are really decisive at the time to decide where to buy x2

Both of these aspects are really decisive WHEN DECIDING where to SHOP

A lot of differents studys have shown that online shopping is gaining popularity x2

A lot of DIFFERENT STUDIES have shown that online shopping is gaining popularity

Nowadays it is commonly to watch news about the increase of the online shopping x2

Nowadays it is COMMON to watch news about the increase IN online shopping

I believe the most influencial factor on people when it comes to online shopping is cost. x2

I believe the most INFLUENTIAL factor FOR people when it comes to online shopping is cost.

One important point on online shopping is the comfort it can offer X1

One important point ABOUT online shopping is the comfort it can offer

However, what is the reason of these new popularity? (x2)

However, what is the reason FOR ITS/THIS new popularity?