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Cae 1 December Exam Essay

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  • However, what is the reason of these new popularity? (x2)
    However, what is the reason FOR ITS/THIS new popularity?
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  • One important point on online shopping is the comfort it can offer X1
    One important point ABOUT online shopping is the comfort it can offer
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  • I believe the most influencial factor on people when it comes to online shopping is cost. x2
    I believe the most INFLUENTIAL factor FOR people when it comes to online shopping is cost.
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  • Nowadays it is commonly to watch news about the increase of the online shopping x2
    Nowadays it is COMMON to watch news about the increase IN online shopping
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  • A lot of differents studys have shown that online shopping is gaining popularity x2
    A lot of DIFFERENT STUDIES have shown that online shopping is gaining popularity
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  • Both of these aspects are really decisive at the time to decide where to buy x2
    Both of these aspects are really decisive WHEN DECIDING where to SHOP
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  • There are many different reasons why are changing our ways of shopping x1
    There are many different reasons why OUR WAYS OF SHOPPING ARE CHANGING
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  • The cost is something really important which influences a lot the consumer x2
    The cost is A REALLY IMPORTANT FACTOR WHICH INFLUENCES THE CONSUMER A LOT
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  • Shopping also can be a disconnection for some of us x2
    Shopping can ALSO be a way to unwind for some of us( unwind= formal switch off = informal)
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  • Instead of go to a shopping centre , many people prefer to shop at home x1
    Instead of GOING to a shopping centre , many people prefer to shop at home
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  • Shopping in a mall is still popular. Even though, online shopping is gaining popularity x1
    Shopping in a mall is still popular. HOWEVER/NEVERTHELESS, online shopping is gaining popularity
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  • What's more is easier and more practical to shop online x2
    What IS more IT is easier and more practical to shop online
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