I wanted to go to the library. Consequently, I stayed home and watched penguin documentaries.
Wrong connector!! You could use INSTEAD, instead.
Despite of the rain, we went sunbathing.
Wrong connector: either use DESPITE or IN SPITE OF. Despite the rain... In spite of the rain.
Even though she is my best friend, but I don't trust her with cake.
Double connector: even though and but. Use only one!
I like cats, dogs, turtles, and also unicorns, due to they are magical.
After "Due to" you need to use "the fact that" or a "noun clause"- Due to the fact that they are magical. Due to their magic.
On the other hand, I don’t have a first hand.
On the other hand is a contrast connector. NOTHING TO CONTRAST in this sentence. Just a fun pun.
I have never saw a cat wearing flip-flops.
I have never SEEN ... But now you have. (present perfect).
He explained me how to escape from a llama.
He explained TO me. Ruuuuuun!
She has just told that her cat can rap.
She has just told ME/US/SOMEONE... Meow
He suggested me to dance like a flamingo in the interview.
He suggested I DANCED/DANCING
I have ever eaten 42 hot dogs, and I regret nothing.
I have eaten. "EVER" is for negatives and questions
My teacher said me to stop singing in exams.
said TO me. She's right. Stop already.
Let’s make a photo before we get attacked by seagulls.
wrong collocation: TAKE a photo/picture
I can to be really welcoming, but only on Tuesdays.
I CAN BE (never use "to" after a modal)
He made his homeworks while skating
He DID his HOMEWORK (wrong collocation, and remember it's singular!)
The cookies are eaten by a mysterious creature last night.
WERE eaten (past passive voice)
This song is catchy! I listen it every day!
Listen TO it! Mio amoreeee mio amoreeee
