Improve your essays | Baamboozle - Baamboozle | The Most Fun Classroom Games!

English 44 Public

How can you make your writing better and more formal

Study Slideshow

In second place

Secondary

In second hand

In the second place

Secondly

15

bad things

negative aspects

badly things

bad stuff

things which are not good

15

I am going to tell...

correct

I want to talk about...

An important point to consider is...

Let´s discuss...

15

people of a different place

correct

people who live in a different location

people of different places

people from another countries

15

Well, normally is believed that...

Normally, people believe that...

It is generally believed that

correct

Well, normally it is believed that...

15

Some studys checked that...

correct

Some studies checked that...

Some studies have shown that...

Some studys have proved that...

15

It has not need to be an emotional activiti

It does not need to be an emotional activity

It has not needed to be an emotional activity

There is not necessary for it to be an emotional activity

It need not to be an emotional activity

20

But it deppends on the person also.

However it also deppends on the person

Althought it also depends on the person

Despite it also depends on the person

Although it also depends on the person

15

Another potencial advantage is...

Another potential advantage is...

Other potencial advantage is...

Other potential advantage is...

correct

15

A lot of people, a lot of things, a lot of games, a lot of parents

Many of...

A large number of...

Lots of...

A large amount of...

15

parents don´t want their childrens to...

parents prefer their childrens not to...

parents do not want their sons to...

parents do not want that their children to...

parents would rather their children did not...

15

you are almost every day playing and you can´t stop

you play almost every day and you are not able to stop

you play almost every day due to you can not stop

you can´t stop because you´re playing almost every day

correct

15

Teenagers only focus on spend a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus on having a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus in having a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus in spending a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus on spending a pleasant time

15

they do not care about if it harmful to their health

they do not care about if it is harmful to their healt

correct

they do not care if it is harmful to their health

they don´t care if it´s harmful to their health

15

Hellow, I am ___ and this is my essay

Hi there, I am ___, welcome to my essay!

This is not how you start an essay

Hello, my name is ___ and this is my essay

Hello, I am going to introduce my essay

10

I spend the time that I can play playing FIFA

The majority of my free time is spent playing FIFA

I spend all time that I can playing FIFA

I spend a lot of time play the FIFA

correct

15