Correct or incorrect: The blade seems to have its own thoughts, I am still learning how to control and use it, it is not that easy!
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Correct? The tunnel had torches on both sides of the wall. Even with that, the tunnel was very dark. At this point, Louis has little to nothing hope of surviving this.
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Vary openers: The football fans cheered and groaned as the game continued
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What was the extended metaphor used to describe Cooper Pedy?